WALT: Write a narrative
Success Criteria: I will
Write in first person - I, We OR write in third person about Jack and Harry.
Use dialogue
Use vivid verbs and amazing adjectives to bring my characters to life.
Express emotion through my words.
Hi I am Jake I have a dog named Harry We live in this mega city. The structures are in fact tall.
But people hate and love this city. Everyday and night I have to croon on the sidewalk for money. I don't make that much but it's just enough but that's alright i have a push bike that i have/ had for 6 years i am trying to save some money so i can go to the countryside i sleep in a apartment that i have been in sense my mum and dad died 7 years ago when i was 9.
Every single day I wiggle my tail, bark encouragement to passing strangers. on that sidewalk hoping to get enough money to go to the countryside. I have to pick up 5 cents off the ground. I want to see the sunshine slowly i started to make enough money then when i have enough money me and Jake went to the countryside.
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